tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-150330670763411875.post1264035192409894458..comments2023-05-11T02:41:59.569-07:00Comments on COWABUNGASRISHTI: MIMANSA STORYUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-150330670763411875.post-15122831518590233882010-02-12T09:44:32.288-08:002010-02-12T09:44:32.288-08:001. Whoever heard of a male ballet dancer?
Don'...1. Whoever heard of a male ballet dancer?<br />Don't you know that some of the greatest ballet dancers have been male?<br />2. Okay for a first attempt. But is it so simple to get into the ballet dancer fantasy?<br />3. The end is alright but there is no plot really, is there?<br />4. Push it, lady. Build up the tension, create a climax and then you can take it to the anti-climax, the snoring Dad.<br />5. See if you can make the narrative even more visual because that will help you when you move into the thumbnails - which should happen after you push the story one more level.elf_asurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150005989299987267noreply@blogger.com