tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-150330670763411875.post7969568250360173330..comments2023-05-11T02:41:59.569-07:00Comments on COWABUNGASRISHTI: TISHA STORYUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-150330670763411875.post-35608681609182168882010-02-12T07:39:48.427-08:002010-02-12T07:39:48.427-08:001. I don't see any OBSTACLES and how Aamir get...1. I don't see any OBSTACLES and how Aamir gets around them. He just meets characters and asks them about his goat.<br />2. The characters seem interesting in themselves but what is their real contribution - a bit of humor perhaps - their caricatures perhaps - but how do they drive the plot?<br />3. I like the idea of clues in the story. Don't lose that thread.<br />4. I think what you need to work on is PLOT. Plot is the sequence of events that push the action (make it rise) to climax(es)to culminate in something interesting at the end. How can you do this? You are almost there. Now cross the Rubicon.elf_asurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150005989299987267noreply@blogger.com