A Course on Sequential Art with the Coolest Students in the World at the Srishti School of Art, Design and Technology, Bangalore facilitated by Avy, Raghu, Ramana
The context is alien for people without the explanation. And the explanation makes it even more descriptive. How can you move beyond the extra explanation so the frame itself tells the story? In terms of character too, the central guy needs to become more consistent so you can use him steadily across a full-fledged strip.