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Black Captain America
White Captain America
A Course on Sequential Art with the Coolest Students in the World at the Srishti School of Art, Design and Technology, Bangalore facilitated by Avy, Raghu, Ramana
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- FINAL SUBMISSIONS OF COWABUNGA COMICS
- Samvida-Final story
- Mimansa - final breakdown
- Mimansa - sketches of finals
- MITALEE : Frames/style/layout/sequence. WIP
- Akshataa: Character 3
- some in between thumbnails and finals. - aniruddh.
- aniruddh's FINAL final script.
- Akshataa: Character 2
- Shilo- More render
- Khoya- Final script format- illustration example-s...
- DISHA: character tweaking and (semi) finals
- Sargam: Thumbnails Set 2
- Mitalee: Trying the look and feel of the style. sk...
- Samvida- Work in Progress
- Akshataa: Character and Thumbnails
- Work In Progress - Bharat.
- Sargam: Thumbnails Set 1
- Varun - characters and thumbnails of the first thr...
- Sharvari-Thumbnails Pg1-4
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it didnt upload properly. but the bottom page is 1st, and the one above it is second.
ReplyDeletethey are to be seen side by side.
I like very much the style-textures etc.
ReplyDeleteI think you can do some interesting stuff with your type though.
especially since the story itself is so vivid. Why limit the type to sans- serif in white box?
but it's looking varr nice otherwise. :)
make sure the images uploaded are RGB, that might be the reason why it did not upload properly.
ReplyDeletethank you :)
ReplyDeleteyes. the text was proving rather flat when i tried out different variations. but some fonts seemed to make it too cluttered also!
must find the "right" fit font for it.
indeed i shall.
thank ye once more!
:)
Interesting feel, but since I don't know what you did with the story itself, I have no clue what's happening or where it's going.
ReplyDeleteAlso, please figure out how to upload properly like every other person.
I need to see pages - the story laid out as pages - and the thumbnails on it.
If you're still exploring style, remember time is also running out.
Out of the only frame that is legible and that is the last one, it looks a bit flat. Maybe you can play with perspective to magnify the idea of the crane pulling something?
ReplyDeleteIf you really want feedback then you should try uploading the pics again properly. Also, maybe you can try handwriting instead of typing? The type doesn't really go with the theme of your story.
thanks anurag.
ReplyDeleteplay with perspective.
experiment with it i shall.