Monday, February 8, 2010

rajasee: two more characters, 4 frame, log line.

character two:



character three:



four frame with three: "grief"


potential log line for narrative:

a casual lip-reading course introduces a man into a strange and frightening new world.

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2 comments:

  1. elf_asuraFebruary 9, 2010 at 3:31 AM

    You are improving by leaps and bounds.
    The characters are lovely.
    The log line is very interesting but can you flesh it out a bit more so we know a bit more?

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  2. smitha cariappaFebruary 10, 2010 at 10:30 PM

    style's good but the lines could be more continous... they are broken at the moment

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