Monday, February 8, 2010

rajasee: two more characters, 4 frame, log line.

character two:

character three:

four frame with three: "grief"

potential log line for narrative:

a casual lip-reading course introduces a man into a strange and frightening new world.


  1. You are improving by leaps and bounds.
    The characters are lovely.
    The log line is very interesting but can you flesh it out a bit more so we know a bit more?

  2. style's good but the lines could be more continous... they are broken at the moment